How it passes
And what it does
To people
Once kids
Then boys and girls
Then men and women
The core
And the shell,
Question?
And silently answer, repel
Run and cry
Vision and then the eyes
It is named time
A futile power
A living dead
And a deceitful truth
They say
No point in holding on to it
Repeat and memorize
Daily once, twice, thrice
But Oh! The beauty
That passed by
Still blinks in my wet eyes
People named friends
Those days and trends
That garden and those benches
Still….. still….
A few certificates
Remind me of my victory
And their defeat
Prize money is all spent
That time is dead
Not even a year old
In this new world
Everybody inquires
Of my past life
And secretly laugh
When I turn my eyes
These photographs
Are deep
An ocean of time
Like two Samosa’s
Dipped in coconut chutney
Or a bottle of soft drink
That passed till last sip
See them
A lot more
Is beneath them
A tranquil layer of vodka,
Lime, ice and a pinch of salt,
The froth of beer,
Aroma of the coffee,
In million card houses.
Sound of music,
Debates on feminism,
Chains of smoke,
Libraries and their ambiance
Hugs and kisses,
Diary entries and dope,
Rushing to the college
To show what you wrote.
A car accident,
When we were broke.
Losing control, after 8 P.M
Sleeping in the girls’ room.
Rain in the desert,
Full moon in the bathtub,
The kurta with the shloks
The teachers who became friends,
That bonfire and the holy smoke
Ashes and dew drops
Think about them
So….. many
So many moments
Make these photographs
Always remember
It’s just me
Another victim of time
27 comments:
long but good... very smooth flow
Time frozen in to million pellets..Life gets sliced by the diamond cutter...so close yet each one separate..time has no logic so there is no need of any sort of connection between these slice..yet time itself is the logic....
loved it..
i like images..your post was too rich..inspirational..
keep on posting..
me too have a new post..
hope you will read it...
:-< I'm a victim too.. I miss everything so much..
U've written well.. got all nostalgic, hmm?
:)
The emotion behind this work was pretty well brought up. It certainly has a very nostalgic touch to it.
Nice work.
You got me all nostalgic! But, i love what you have written! :)
I liked it very much... Nice poem... :D
ishqia : Thanks
MAN IN PAINTING : I agree with ur thoughts ..... sure thing: I will check ur post...
Shruti : I am glad you cud identify...
Alok, Thanks
Anindita: thanks
ThanaMoi : thanks ...
wohooo!!
Nice understanding of time..
I think one of the biggest gifts that time has given me is the bouquet of memories too...
Very nice!!!
Got intense towards the end.I like it.Also,a guy writing about wet eyes always a pleasure to read...erm...well...I mean,usually men dont talk about crying,thts why.
Good one. Keep writing. No update?
Beauty and the BEast : Thanks .... u r right ... memories are very important...
Sree: Thank you so much...I know what you mean....but I think that's more of "burden of masculinity" ....lol..
Venus: Thanks....will update soon!!
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘crazypoems’ and 'car memoirs' took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
Ray: sure thing!!
The Memory Remains.
Hai..
me have a new post..
do visit..
MIP
yaar tu bahut cool likhta hai!
loved it man... i can never hold a thought for this long, and ive always been awed by ppl who can.
Ravish: It sure does....
Man In Painting: Sure thing!!
Raghav: Thanks brother!! How is life?
Like others, that got me nostalgic too! beautiful piece of poetry!
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